Paper for Journal: Usability Inspection Criteria for e-Learning Portals

I have written drafts - journal papers...which I intend to submit to some journals.
I am targetting iJET and JCAL.

Firstly,
Title: Usability Inspection Criteria for e-Learning Portals.
Authors: 1 Yeap, Michael Teck Chong; 2 Koo, Ah Choo, PhD; 3 Tengku Shariman, Tengku Putri Norishah.
First target: iJET - International Journal of Emerging Technogies in Learning.
Wordcount: 5,545.
Pages: approximately 9 pages (Journal format).
Draft pages: 21 (1.5 line spacing, Times New Roman 12).
V2 completed: 2/11/2010 (Tue) 0045H.
Hope to submit by mid November 2o1o.

Secondly,
Title: Learning-related usability criteria for usability evaluation of e-learning portals.
Authors: 1 Yeap, Michael Teck Chong; 2 Koo, Ah Choo, PhD; 3 Tengku Shariman, Tengku Putri Norishah; 4 Hew, Soon Hin, PhD.
First target: JCAL - Journal of Computer Assisted Learning.
Hope to submit by end November 2010.

V2 completed: 4/11/2010 (Thu) 0212H.
Wordcount: 8,008.
Pages: approximately 13-14 pages (Journal format).
Draft pages: 31 pages (1.5 line spacing, Times New Roman 12).

V2.1 completed: 5/11/2010 (Fri) 1626H.
V2.1: after Dr Hew's comment about too long; delete some subtopics, tables and charts.
Wordcount: 6,923.
Pages: approximately 9-11 pages (Journal format).
Draft pages: 17 pages (single spacing, Times New Roman).